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Friday, March 29, 2019

Saving Our Marine Life.

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  1. Hi Callum,
    Well done on all your research. You have gathered information from a wide range of sources to put together into this presentation. Your use of graphics, videos and links add impact to your work. I was fascinated to watch how the ocean cleanup project worked. I hope it has a postive effect on the problem.
    One thing you might think about for next time is the order of your information. It would be best to have the page of links at the end, for example, and I noticed three pages with information about the ocean cleanup project, but they were broken up by two other pages of information and opinion. You have done so much work, but you also need to be critical about what you use and in what order to have maximum impact.

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