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Wednesday, June 24, 2020

Literacy Poems

For the past few weeks our literacy focus has been around poems. We have had to make 10 poems about anything and it can be any type of poem. My favourite type of poem is triplet poems even though I am not very good at them. Here is a Bio Poem I made about Elon Musk.
Elon
Knowledgeable, Serious, Genuine, Creative
Father of X Æ A-12 Musk
He loves making cars and creating rockets
He felt happiness when his rockets launch and joy when his child
was born. 
He felt success when Tesla got popular.
He feels fear when a rocket is going to launch. He fears Tesla is
going to fail. He fears SpaceX will not go to Mars.
Creator of PayPal, Tesla and SpaceX.
He wants to go to Mars and all cars to be electric
He was born in Pretoria South africa living in Los Angeles
Musk


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4 comments:

  1. JaneJune 25, 2020 at 6:23 PM

    Well done Callum, I liked your poem, you chose an interesting person. Elon has accomplished a lot In his life and seems to have such far reaching vision. I didn’t know he feared failure.
    Do you think SpaceX will get to Mars?

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    1. AnonymousJuly 1, 2020 at 9:57 AM

      Hi Jane, I do think Spacex will get to Mars but it could take a few tries to get there but they should in the end.

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  2. AnonymousJuly 21, 2020 at 1:31 PM

    Hi callum I find the childs name interesting and unique do you think that you can teach me how to say it thanks.

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    1. AnonymousJuly 21, 2020 at 1:42 PM

      Hi Cayden, I could teach you how to say the child's name one day if you would like.

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