One afternoon I was hiking around the mountains when I peered around a bush and spotted something.
I was shocked, there's a Ute coming at me at 100 kilometres an hour. I darted away like a deer
getting chased by a hunter. It was coming at me so fast I knew I would die. It appeared to be an
old Toyota Hilux, but there's a gun attached to the roof, RUN I said to myself. I found a corrugated
iron fence and waited for the groaning engine noise to go away. But I see more blinding headlights
coming my way...
I was shocked, there's a Ute coming at me at 100 kilometres an hour. I darted away like a deer
getting chased by a hunter. It was coming at me so fast I knew I would die. It appeared to be an
old Toyota Hilux, but there's a gun attached to the roof, RUN I said to myself. I found a corrugated
iron fence and waited for the groaning engine noise to go away. But I see more blinding headlights
coming my way...
Callum??? You can't leave it there. What is going to happen next? Now I'm all in suspense. I love the way you have used language to create a real atmosphere and a sense of anticipation.
ReplyDeleteHi Paul.
ReplyDeleteMaybe I could do a part 2 because I have all the time, but this was for a literacy 100 word story so I colud'nt go too overboard.